To the one I love

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    To the one I love


    Your breath is a whisper in the wind, A light in a lost tunnel
    It brings hope and happiness to my soul.
    You cannot smell your breath,but you can smell the passion it will bring when it pulls our bodies together in the night.
    You cannot see your breath in the heat,only in the cold when it wants to be shown to let you know that it and you still there.But even in the heat you can still see the smiles it brings to all the the people around you.You cannot feel your breath;only the heat,but I hope you can feel the good it brings inside my soul.It takes away old sorrow and worry,it dry`s my tears and your breath leaves me longing just to hear you again,to feel you.You cannot smell or see,or feel your breath,my love,but it is there, and it is alive, and it has found its way into my heart.That is just one little reason why I love You.

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    lowell commented on To the one I love

    08-10-2009

    this poem reminds me of the passion i have felt before with a lover. it took me back to another time in my life when i was young and was not so caught up with everyday hum drum. i long to feel this again .

    dahlusion commented on To the one I love

    06-24-2009

    The romanticism here is beautifully composed with such perfect poetic smoothness, lovely flow, and sexy imagery.

    lonewolf commented on To the one I love

    03-21-2009

    nice romantic poem. good job. i enjoy reading your work

    Drivingczar commented on To the one I love

    03-13-2009

    Hopeless romantic!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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