Rejected

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Rejected

A single tear runs down my cheek

My heart is broken and weak

The path you chose was not mine

I wish you had given me a sign

 

She’s prettier, skinnier, and yours

My heart is crushed as hers sores

Blank stares, fake smiles, a shrug

Its all I can give when you act so smug

 

Exhaustion and pain surrounds me now

As I wonder, and try to figure out how

I want soft kisses, a tender caress

I miss you, and I’m such a mess

 

All I can do is watch and wait

Oh God, I detest this cruel fate

Alone I walk and alone I am

But no one ever gives a damn

 

Loneliness is surely the cruelest gift

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rossmangeles commented on Rejected

06-10-2009

Dear Serenity: I love the way U write a poem. It is realistic, filled with emotions and colored with sincerity. It drives down a compelling message on how it affects one human being when he or she was rejected. Congrats! Keep it up. Ross

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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