Rejected

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  • Emotional
    • stormimartin
    • Wow it's been a long time since I've visited my account they've changed everything! I need to get back into my groove of writing just been so busy being a new Mommy!!!

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    -Why is it when you need someone the most they turn the other cheek?
    It doesn't change it's the same day by day week by week.
    -Making you feel as if you are a two headed freak.
    Just wanting to be loved and accepted.
    -Not always wanting to feel depressed and rejected.
    Sadness and anger filling in my head.
    -Can't close my eyes and lay myself to bed.
    Never talking about these ugly unseen wounds.
    -Wounds that lay deep within my soul.
    You've always made me feel helpless like a little child with no control.
    -Tears fill my eyes and rage fills my heart, as I keep telling myself don't fall apart.

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    Weatherstone commented on Rejected

    04-08-2009

    Once again, I can't help but feel there should be more here. You have a good way of expressing yourself. Keep it up! I'd rework that form a little to get better use of the flow of the words. But that's just me.

    JaLaw commented on Rejected

    03-06-2009

    You should consider being a writer. You write great Expressions.

    ozzydio18 commented on Rejected

    02-26-2009

    nice work.thank you 4 the ad...hope you have a great week...

    rollerderby commented on Rejected

    12-31-2008

    Well done Stormi, I really enjoyed reading a segment of your life, though a sad on, I lived os South Padre Isl. for a while, but at present I'm in Antarctica working. Hope to be back home in Florida in March. Thanks for sharing your work with us! Do

    lonewolf commented on Rejected

    11-23-2008

    very powerful emotions. I'm glad you decided to share.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    stormimartin’s Poems (16)

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    my everything 6
    Dear Daddy 16
    Always inside 9
    I have you 11
    GONE 12
    Rejected 5
    In Time 2
    Fallen Pieces 5
    Forever 2
    Little Man 1
    Last Breath 5
    Black Widow 6
    Empty 1
    Your life 5
    Thoughtless Words 3
    One Tear 8