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    • Wow it's been a long time since I've visited my account they've changed everything! I need to get back into my groove of writing just been so busy being a new Mommy!!!

    GONE



    Walking alone with no ones hand to hold. Trying to fit in trying to figure out which creature to mold. Yearning to be loved, but still left so hollow. Wanting to figure it out, and not follow.
    Everyday another struggle another fear. Smiling on the outside but holding back another tear, and yet passes another year. Same questions same doubts trying all the different routes.
    Why does this cruel empty world have to be so cold? Never knowing when to just fold. Trying to remember all the things my mother had told. Its the hardest thing to do when you were always left alone.
    Wishing there was someone there to answer the phone. Memories are far and few in between, wondering why you can't look back.
    Because it felt just as bad as a heart attack. Wishing my life were different in so many ways. Always thinking this is all just a phase that will be over soon someday.
    But here I am still wondering is that day today? Thinking one day I will wake up and have the answers and be deamed of all this pain that I have kept inside for so long. Will one day it all be gone. .


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    Qualin commented on GONE

    06-16-2010

    EVERYDAY ANOTHER STRUGGLE ,"LOOKIN FOR LOVE IN ALL THE WRONG PLACES COMES TO MIND...I SEE NO REASON FOR A BEAUT' TO BE ALONE....UNLESS THERE IS THE UNTOLD...A FRIEND QUALIN

    bknight commented on GONE

    09-07-2009

    Great filled with intense feeling...if you can answer the Why's that which you seek will follow...you captured the pain many of us have felt...thanks...B

    black1rain commented on GONE

    04-30-2009

    know how that is

    joanlorraine commented on GONE

    03-01-2009

    idk... if it will be gone. But, writing helps. As I read... I finished some verses. Not saying it typical just get it. Nice poem.

    frgy25 commented on GONE

    02-04-2009

    Deep...very deep. Great poem, I love it!!!!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    stormimartin’s Poems (16)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    my everything 6
    Dear Daddy 16
    Always inside 9
    I have you 11
    GONE 12
    Rejected 5
    In Time 2
    Fallen Pieces 5
    Forever 2
    Little Man 1
    Last Breath 5
    Black Widow 6
    Empty 1
    Your life 5
    Thoughtless Words 3
    One Tear 8