Always inside

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    Always inside


    Missing you for so many years, pushing myself through so many tears.
    Sadness filled my heart. Blackness filled my mind when our pathes took us apart.
    Through the minutes, days, and years. I have pushed myself through so many tears.
    Walking alone empty inside. The day I heard your voice.
    Every emotion ran through my body. I had no choice.
    Soon enough we reunited. I was still in love with you there was no denying it.
    You were my first love, and when I said forever that's what I meant.
    You are my angel that has been sent!

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    Qualin commented on Always inside

    08-04-2010

    when someone is captured by every word ...relating to those spoken...then you have done your part...life has been good to you if you found your first Love again...I have searched but never found her...a very good write ...Qualin
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    charmlessman2d commented on Always inside

    04-06-2010

    its hard to give up that first love. my first love still haunts me and i make excuses to myself to forget her then i end up remembering her all over again. this poem reminds me of that painful cycle and process that is unevitable. goodpiece of writing here. keep it up. write more!
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    Weatherstone commented on Always inside

    04-08-2009

    I wanted you to keep going! I felt like there was more to say somewhere. Something left unexpressed. Something missing and needed to complete it. Some kind of resolve. But that's just me. I also think the language could have been made more powerful with a different form. These are just minor suggestions, though. Keep up the good work.
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    Paradox commented on Always inside

    04-06-2009

    I just wanted to stop by and Thank You for taking the time to visit my page. And I've read thru your poems, I can see that you put much emotion into expressing your feelings thru your words. I look forward to reading more of your poems in the future.
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    WordSlinger commented on Always inside

    02-09-2009

    You were my first love, and when I said forever that's what I meant. You are my angel that has been sent! Strong lines
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    stormimartin’s Poems (16)

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    my everything 6 04/15/2009
    Dear Daddy 16 02/02/2009
    Always inside 9 01/28/2009
    I have you 11 01/28/2009
    GONE 12 12/25/2008
    Rejected 5 11/23/2008
    In Time 2 11/23/2008
    Fallen Pieces 5 11/23/2008
    Forever 2 11/23/2008
    Little Man 1 11/23/2008
    Last Breath 5 11/23/2008
    Black Widow 6 11/23/2008
    Empty 1 11/23/2008
    Your life 5 11/22/2008
    Thoughtless Words 3 11/22/2008
    One Tear 8 11/22/2008
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