Little Man

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    • stormimartin
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    Little Man



    My mind is always racing like the devils behind the wheel. Can't control my throughts or actions, what's the deal.

    Don't know who I am or who I will become. So many questions to never be answered.

    Tell me who is suppose to win this race of life, and do they get a big prize.

    Are you really happy when you make it to the top? Everyone has that little man inside them driving that just won't stop.

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    Weatherstone commented on Little Man

    04-08-2009

    This is a good start...please keep going!! There's a LOT more here to develop, I think. Also, reformatting it would help, I think.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    Empty 1
    Your life 5
    Thoughtless Words 3
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