Realm of Delusion

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    Realm of Delusion


    Meeting in the Realm of Delusion,
    together we traveled the tranquil valleys of my imagination,
    past the rolling hills of self-doubt, 
    beyond the deserted plains of despair

    We nestled for a time on my peace of mind,
    watching the setting sun cast a shadow over my lonesome heart,
    as we traded our poetry all the while

    Your words are so brilliant, I cower at their beauty
    Your beauty so radiant, I cower at its brilliance

    I look into your eyes and get lost in your stare,
    then you guide my way by the light of your smile,
    my mind so powerful but still I fail to replicate the essence
    of  your loveliness

    Laying on our backs we gaze up to the open skies of my perception,
    to see the neurons of my mind firing fiercely

    It appears to be a meteor shower of emotion

    We pretend they are shooting stars

    While making our wishes,
    We are soon interrupted by the planes of reality flying overhead...

    ...Breaking the Silence

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    Charlie23 commented on Realm of Delusion

    06-10-2010

    Wow! This is amazing! The images you bring to mind all while feeling I'm walking through anothers dream.... Awesome!
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    SuSpence

    06/10/2010

    Thanks so much Charlie, I wrote this when I was away from my love at the time, and I was writing this to her to tell her we are apart in miles, but we can be together in our minds. So this was my date with her in my mind while she was away Haha. Thanks for the read. ~Spence

    candyrus commented on Realm of Delusion

    05-03-2010

    wow spence this poem is great..people have different points of veiw on beauty and i love yours. love always=candy
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    SuSpence

    05/03/2010

    Thanks candy, im so glad you liked it. Hope it inspires something to cure taht writers block. -Spence

    pocketofdreams6 commented on Realm of Delusion

    04-15-2010

    Wow I really enjoyed this, my interpretation of this piece is that there is so much beauty and tranquility out in this world, that sometimes we forget to pay attention to all, because of our fast pace and constant distractions.
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    latinangel commented on Realm of Delusion

    07-28-2009

    Wow! I feel like I was just taken on a marvelous trip through the intircate halls of your mind. And what a beautfiul mind it is. I love your imagination and the creative way you crafted the description of your imagination. This is one of my new favorites.
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    kittman101 commented on Realm of Delusion

    07-10-2009

    i love the passion, and the mental descriptions. and the moment being shared by 2 people. very passionate, evn if it is just laying under the stars. Sometimes all it tak is 1 sparkle to become a night of pure magic.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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