A New Path

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    A New Path

     

    I could die this very day
    The sun would rise, skies would rain
    Life goes on within, without
    My life's path overgrown with doubt

    The crescent moon once smiled at me
    The stars were hiding amongst the trees
    I found my way by light of the moon
    This path i'm on will be ending soon

    A new path, forged through the fields of change
    Where it leads is out of range
    Exciting and new, though I cannot see
    The day I die, today will not be

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    Charlie23 commented on A New Path

    10-06-2010

    This is awesome Spence! I loved the rhythm and rhyme to it -- and the idea when I finished the last line made me smile a little...
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    redbloodink commented on A New Path

    04-12-2010

    "A new path, forged through the fields of change Where it leads is out of range" and the rest of the piece is so in range of being super.... red
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    Chaos128 commented on A New Path

    10-19-2009

    I concur with your conclusion. It's alway best to keep your options open. Good stuff, Sus!
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    kittman101 commented on A New Path

    07-10-2009

    this is an interesting way to look at life. knowing death is just around te corner, yet it will no be this day. Awesome way of writing
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    purplekisses commented on A New Path

    07-07-2009

    wow very emotional.................................................
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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