Gulf of Fire (Haiku)
Once Beautiful Gulf
Engulfed By Waves Of Fire
My Lord, What Have We Done
Gulf of Fire (Haiku)
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This is my very first attempt at Haiku...this was influenced by the catastrophic oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico, which they are currently burning off the surface.Once Beautiful Gulf
Engulfed By Waves Of Fire
My Lord, What Have We Done
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cousinsoren commented on Gulf of Fire (Haiku)
06-06-2010
- I am thinking all OP Poets ,and the conscious world share this concern of the Gulf of Mexico Oil Spill, My Friend, Suspense.
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06/09/2010
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SuperChick76 commented on Gulf of Fire (Haiku)
05-27-2010
- Haikus are usually not my favorite types of poetry, but mostly because people can't say enough in one to make it understandable. But you pulled it off. Go figure it'd be you. Haha! Brilliant written, as usual. Thanks for sharing it.
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06/09/2010
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jesusfreake commented on Gulf of Fire (Haiku)
05-03-2010
- get outta here!!!! I love this, lol this was pretty amazing to read though...very thought provoking as well!!
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05/03/2010
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BDIsernhagen commented on Gulf of Fire (Haiku)
05-02-2010
- the image of a "wave" of fire is extremley well-placed and beckoning, as well as a clever twist of phrase as the fire IS in the ocean.. haha great write. thanks for the request!! Id rate it a 15 out of 10!
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05/02/2010
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hippiegirl commented on Gulf of Fire (Haiku)
05-01-2010
- great job... mankind sickens me. we are destroying everything... "save the whales, kill the humans!!!"
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