Rain, tears and angels.

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    Rain, tears and angels.

    Rain, tears, and angels.
    Today the rain falls down fast.
    It blends and hides her tears.
    She walks real slow and as she thinks,
    It washes away her fears.
    Its cold as ice as it whips her face,
    But at the same time burns her skin.
    It soaks her clothes. It wets her hair.
    And the sorrow starts to seep in.
    She walks the streets. The people stare.
    They see the girl that is crying.
    But what they don’t know is that inside,
    This girl is painfully dying.
    Outside the rain is falling.
    It falls like broken glass.
    Her heart is broken and the drops
    Remind her of the past.
    All the heartbroken tears she had shed
    Was excrutiatingly painful.
    To think of the mistakes from the past
    Would make her mad and hateful.
    Today the rain is falling.
    Its full of angry beasts.
    But as the shining sun comes out,
    Her heart is set at peace.
    Her wings expand and she flys above,
    Up to her brand new home.
    Her halo is glowing and so is her smile,
    Because now she is not alone.

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    armymom1025 commented on Rain, tears and angels.

    12-27-2009

    great poem good luck to you! Keep writing your poems and good luck to you.

    origionalmerlin commented on Rain, tears and angels.

    04-06-2009

    agree with other comment.. well said, good word choice and imagry, ty for posting this

    InLoveTomorrow

    06/02/2009

    thank you for commenting on my poem. I really think this is one of my best writes

    WordSlinger commented on Rain, tears and angels.

    04-01-2009

    I have to rate this a 10 for alot reasons, 1 I am feeling this person written. 2.The rhymes work well. #. the ending as well as the whole poem is beautiful. Great Poem

    InLoveTomorrow

    06/02/2009

    thank you. It means alot that you like my work. This is one of my best poems

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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