Not A Monster Or Angel

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    Not A Monster Or Angel

    She's not a monster,
    And she's not an angel,
    But people still blame her,
    Not caring how her feelings are fragile,

    She takes a step out the door,
    And all he'll breaks loose,
    It tears us up down to the core,
    As we realize fighting is no use,

    Her mother only works for the best,
    Yet people judge her as the worst,
    And never stops to think or even guess,
    That she is not even cursed,

    This child is a blessing,
    But people are too ignorant to notice,
    That she is doing her best in facing,
    Those who don't understand except for those closes,

    She's not a monster,
    And she's not an angel,
    But she fights back the tears people have caused her,
    And she knows she's more than fragile.

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    altun commented on Not A Monster Or Angel

    09-29-2009

    gentle advice - get someone to read your poems before you post - some of the missed-grammar takes away from the poem's full affect. i like this one, i like the imagery - the need/fight to be understood, but in the end we all tend to be misunderstood - the irony of life. good poem.

    Tomarra

    10/15/2009

    I'm too shy to show people around me my poems or they just don't care but thanx for the advise, and it is a need/fight thing, my lil sister is bipolar so people judge her before they know her.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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