I Can See

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  • Sadness

    I Can See
    I CAN SEE THE RAIN,

    AS HER TEARS FALL IN HEARTACHE AND PAIN,

    I CAN SEE THE DAYS TURN TO NIGHT,

    AS SHE THROWS ON A GOOD FIGHT,

    WITH THE PEOPLE AROUND HER,

    SO SHE CAN STAY FOR SURE.

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    arfin09 commented on I Can See

    03-01-2009

    I LIKED THIS? THE CAPS LOCK ON IS VERY DISTRACTING. you lost me with last 2 lines. stay where?
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    Tomarra’s Poems (16)

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    That Day 1 02/23/2009
    Edge Of This Ledge 1 02/23/2009
    Until I Came Back... 0 02/23/2009
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    Until The Time Comes 1 02/20/2009
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