NIGHTMARE

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    • phoenix29
    • been a member since 2008, under PHOENIX9 &29. PHOENIX is my writing name,.have over 150 poems here, trying to help the site if i can to be a great site for creative poets everywhere, read and help and comment those who need it.. anyone want to do challenges? let me know.

    NIGHTMARE

    Nightmare
    When will this nightmare end,
    When will I awake,
    The clocks been stuck at midnight,
    My life is on hold,
    My soul is tired, Life is strained,
    Loneliness has taken over my heart,
    I'm overwhelmed till I awake,
    For this night goes on forever,
    My thoughts are lost in a fog,
    Not a clear day in sight,
    One day I shall awake,
    To finally realize this nightmare is over,
    Then wonder if I ever fell asleep.

    Richard(Phoenix)Cartledge (c)

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    Ming commented on NIGHTMARE

    01-14-2021

    Nice write - I like poems like this - I love the ending .
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    VICTORE410 commented on NIGHTMARE

    11-09-2019

    Just needs a few rhymes somewhere...Good pathos form that I know so well.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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