ITS NOT ME

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    • phoenix29
    • been a member since 2008, under PHOENIX9 &29. PHOENIX is my writing name,.have over 150 poems here, trying to help the site if i can to be a great site for creative poets everywhere, read and help and comment those who need it.. anyone want to do challenges? let me know.

    ITS NOT ME

    IT'S NOT ME

    It's not  how I look at life that disturbs me,
    It's not how people treat me either,
    It's not what I expected or wanted,
    It's not how I thought things would be,
    It's not what I wanted in life, Where I wanted to be,
    Who I wanted to be, What you or I needed to be,
    It's not that I couldn't or wouldn't, That the expectations
    were to high,
    It's not where I wanted to stay, Here, Now,
    It's just not who I am,
    It's not .............ME.


    Richard E. Cartledge    PHOENIX   (c)

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    Ming commented on ITS NOT ME

    01-14-2021

    I like your stuff, it's honest. Keep writing, I'll keep reading. -Much Peace
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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