ALL IN A SECOND

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  • phoenix29
  • been a member since 2008, under PHOENIX9 &29. PHOENIX is my writing name,.have over 150 poems here, trying to help the site if i can to be a great site for creative poets everywhere, read and help and comment those who need it.. anyone want to do challenges? let me know.

ALL IN A SECOND

All in a Second

You sit there across from me,
Watching intently , What do you see?
Something about my eyes? Something bright,
Something not quite right, Something dark,
Sitting across from me you stare, I stare back,
You look deep into my eyes, Past the smile and the twinkle,
You feel as if you are being sucked into them,
As if on a roller coaster ride on a steep decline,
Picking up speed as you drop out of sight,
It's taking you deeper, Faster, Darker and Colder,
Your hanging on, You see no end, Just a bottomless pit,
Your thinking where could this end,
Feeling there is no escape, Falling faster,
Your spinning out of control,
As the darkness rushes up to grab you,

You looked into my eyes and Screame


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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

phoenix29’s Poems (28)

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PERFECT PITCH 0
NIGHTMARE 2
NEVER ENOUGH 2
THE GREATEST POEM EVER WRITTEN 1
ITS NOT ME 1
INTENSITY 0
INSIGNIFCANT 0
IM A COSMIC JOKE 1
I AM MADE OF LIGHT 0
HARSH WORLD 0
ETERNAL SAND 0
DEVOURED 0
DEATH BY LIFE 0
DEAD 0
CHARRED REMAINS 0
BEYONDE REASON 0
AYERS ROCK 0
ALL THAT I HAVE LOST 0
BLOOD AND CHAMPAGNE 0
HERE COMES THE CARNIVORES 0
ALL IN A SECOND 0
THE LAST CARNIVAL 0
is there a contest? not since 2010 0
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DEAD EYES 0
EVERY 0
FLY 1
SAYINGS 0