My Enemy

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    My Enemy
    I scream with all my might but silently
    As I smile at the world that treats me violently
    Feeding me torture disguised oh so beautifully
    As the mirror I hide from shows the true culprit is me
    I am my own worst enemy although so hard to admit
    I'm stubborn confused and to proud to quit
    But how do I fix me when I'm the reason I'm broken
    Confused and defeated by my own reality but hoping
    To defeat the beast within at a lost for a remedy
    A losing battle to win to defeat me the enemy

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    fennesse commented on My Enemy

    04-21-2009

    This one is very good I can so relate to this"Confused and defeated by my own reality..." this one hits home
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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on My Enemy

    04-13-2009

    nice!! it deserves better than i could rate it...(10) great poem..
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    TheLastPoet commented on My Enemy

    04-05-2009

    In life sometime the hardest battle is with the man in the mirror...10!
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    dangedmanjr commented on My Enemy

    03-25-2009

    i've got a thing for mirrors and self image...i like this one!
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