My back

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    My back

    Friendly to the  front what about my back
    When its turned you talk your best smack
    Once friend turned foe
    Feels as I don’t know
    Respect like fire in the wind
    Not daring to reach for your hand
    Afraid to turn back on life
    For I might find a knife……..

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    amber12172 commented on My back

    07-28-2009

    wow. i love this poem. Its so amazing. And by the way i love that word. Amazing. =) haha.
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    DestinedQueen commented on My back

    07-26-2009

    I can completely understand this and you pack it all into such few lines. There's a lot said here. The line "Respect like fire in the wind..." wow!!! That there is a very powerful line. You have some brilliant work and some great potential keep up the good work and never stop writing. DQ
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