Me

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    Me

    I want to choose where it is I end up.
    I want to be the one who makes that conclusion
    Can it be me?


    Should I go here?
    I am not asking for a ruling but merely your opinion
    Do not make my choices, just let me be.
    Can I be the one who makes the decision?
    Can it be me?


    I would never choose friends over smarts.
    Always knowledge over the arts
    I made that conclusion as you can see
    I am able….

    Able to be me

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    ARU commented on Me

    12-17-2009

    Who is that telling you to be what they choose, ignore them, (media-associates-schoolmates, etc) but silently learn from them. They will never be you...keep pressing onward, be strong and don't forget the Great Spirit! Be the best of What you can be!
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    dawnjyc commented on Me

    07-26-2009

    Love it! This poem has great flow and is a great topic, and shows good direction at sixteen.
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    DestinedQueen commented on Me

    07-26-2009

    Lovely write. Sounds like you are on the right track of making all the right choices. Especially when it comes to friends and smarts...you got to have those brains hun, they keep women ruling the world...lol. Keep it up! DQ
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    photochick commented on Me

    07-26-2009

    very nice poem great flow and message you have some great raw talent looking forward to reading more
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    Richisfun commented on Me

    06-10-2009

    sweet and charming ! make yr choices and keep going on, you are smart so choose wisely , and dont forget to add God in the equation
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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