Mother Nature

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Mother Nature

Withering leaves plummet to the bottomless pit of no return

A thunderous roar unveils its tears amongst a cold heart gone array

Solace to be found on a sparkling jewel as far as the eye can see

 

Inhabit my darkness with a smile that shines intensely beautiful  

Breathe inside my soul with only a sigh of relief

Now I go into the confines of my existence a better man

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heavensdaughter commented on Mother Nature

01-15-2010

very nicely written, I like your word usage, its beautiful

DaleLinc commented on Mother Nature

09-29-2009

Very nice. Not sure anyone reads these comments because I'm new but this is the best one I've read on this site so far.

hbenitez

09/30/2009

Thanks! I'm so humbled by your comment. I do wish to explore the art you have created also. One Love.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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