Mind

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Mind

Pondering the very existence of my existence is ubiquitous

Thou shall never fear a fellow proletarian but succumb to God?

Restraints on a vessel of esoteric knowledge is erroneous

 

A gateway of scrupulous faculties ushers in understanding and wisdom

To rely solely on superstition is an insult to the creative genius within us

Never has man withstood the test of time in relation to human weakness and tragedy

 

All come short of the glory due to a maniacal and insatiable need for excess of power

On the day we part from the physical landscape we inhabited throughout the years

One is faithful of the continuity of life beyond comprehension and measure

 

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jademelissa74 commented on Mind

10-24-2009

This is a powerful message. I love the way in which you decipher the truth. Amazing write!

symmetry commented on Mind

09-18-2009

and life the childhood of our immortality expresses itself so. Great work

hbenitez

09/18/2009

Brilliant vision and foresight I love it! Thank you for taking a journey with me and sharing your thoughts.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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