Moon

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Just a diddy to make u laugh.

Moon

Today I gazed upon the moon
to see if he began to swoon.
nothing there what did I see
I think he looked back at me.

I leaned way back for a better look
tripped and fell into a brook.
flowed along with the flow
as the wind began to blow.

Saw a fish swimming by
caught his tail and made him cry.
felt so bad I nearly drown
as my heart began to pound.

Hit my head on a rock
yes it was quite a shock.
grabbed a tree to set me free
and my spirit was filled with glee.

As I looked upon the moon
it was setting way too soon.
I smile and said it cannot be
the moon was smiling back at me.

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HalfAwake commented on Moon

10-28-2011

Wonderfully random...I suspect drugs were involved...jk

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Morris’s Poems (64)

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UNILLUMINATED 0
DARKNESS 0
Beggars Lament 0
CLARITY 0
DARKNESS 0
HEART SONG 0
Told U! 0
The Forgotten 0
Innocence 0
Welcome 1
Nevermore 1
Majestic 0
Strength 0
The Good Heart 0
Lights 0
"Emi" 0
Time 0
Nearly Lost 0
The Promise 0
Lone 0
Grace 0
Solitude 0
Free 0
Moon 1
Tragedy 0
Dreamer 1
Foreboding 1
Escape 2
My Girl 1
Awaken Sweet One (G) 1
VOID 0
Behold 0
Future Past? 0
Random 0
Vision 0
SAY WHAT? 0
TRUTH. 0
IMAGINE 0
SHADOWS 0
CRYIN FOR YOU 0
"I" 1
BEFORE 0
MAESTRO 2
MY DOG 1
ETERNAL LIGHT 0
LIFETIME 0
Rhythm of Time 2
SPORT OF LIFE 2
Sign Of The Times 7
FADE 8
SHELL 2
Requiem For Life 2
MIDNIGHT 1
Light in Heavan 4
Nightmare 1
Why 12
INSANE 3
End Lust 0
FINAL ILLUSION 1
Tactician 0
Lonely 0
Atheist 3
Toe Jam 8
CHOOSE 3