Mistakes

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    Mistakes

    There was a time once when I felt free.
    My soul flew high and I never questioned why.
    Life was good, I felt it when I looked at my reflection.
    But the days flew by and I lost control of that perfection.
    Anger, jealousy, failure, dislike.
    What happened to my once great life?
    It passed me by in the blink of an eye
    and all I could do was sit and cry.
    No more love or happiness
    but pain and sorrow filled that bliss.
    My life grew gray and my friends faded away.
    Where had it all gone astray?

    I can do nothing now however,
    and I will live with my mistakes forever.
    Never forgetting the wonder life held
    I will fight for it back. I am compelled.

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    kdarcy commented on Mistakes

    05-06-2009

    Nice write, careful ... too many cliches, your concept is great- you are talented enough to take them out and still pull this piece off very well ... give it a try. I like your work, keep it up

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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