Inhale...

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Inhale...

              You know when you stop to breathe and take a good deep breath that fills your lungs. When you let it out, your head feels a little dizzy. Then like a wieght has been lifted off your shoulders?
   That's the dream I'm chasing and reality racing. Not this doom I'm facing.

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alb29oclfl commented on Inhale...

06-19-2010

this feeling I know very well, and found it fading in loves renewal

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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