I Gave You

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    I Gave You

     I gave you a smile, You gave me a frown.
    I gave you my hand,you turned around.
    I gave you the time, You didn't give a day.
    I gave you the day, You didn't give me the time.
    I gave you my heart, You threw it on the groung and stomped on it, then gave it back except the peice that was left on the bottom of your shoe.
    I began to cry, You began to laugh.
    I thought you were everything I could ever dream of. but I finally woke up.

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    lithiumblack commented on I Gave You

    03-06-2010

    You may have been young, but youth usually deals in the harshest truth, truth hurtled well at the subject of this piece. Great write!
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    alb29oclfl commented on I Gave You

    03-04-2010

    I have sadly remember a moment in my life, when I gave a frown following a smile I received and her expression forever etched. I learned the power of a frown, and not to give them at all. Thank you for a gentle reminder.
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