i know you

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    i know you

     when ppl look at your pics i bet they see a thug.
    they see whats on the surface, they dont  look deep enuough
    i can tell you need love, and  a big hug.
    i know, your really not all that tough
    ppl can choose to be afraid of you,
    cuz you have a gun  in your waistband
    you claim to bang, and wear the color blue
    its not  loaded but  it feels good in your hand
    you act like you r this big bad man
    but i know deep down theres a scared boy
    i know the real you. i was your number one fan
    but thats all gone , my heart is not a toy
    soo go on continue to get high
    sell drugs, get money,  be all you wanna be
    but i have to say good bye cuz this bullshit isnt for me

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    raych33 commented on i know you

    05-18-2010

    i tend to fall for those who chose that path.. then i write bout them lol very angrily
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    KING commented on i know you

    05-18-2010

    Me likey! Reminds of several people whove chose that path at one point or another in their lives. That same option was once given to me but, i shook it to the left. Good piece!
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    Milkman commented on i know you

    01-16-2010

    not to echo the previous comment but you seem to fall for the same guy all over again, if hes packing a gun he is a THUG, mixed up in drugs, it isnt good! At least you are getting wiser and turning your back on the life. Your writing has matured as well, this is much more insightfull of thought and character than your earlier stuff, keep working at it, try and write on some positive themes something more detached from YOU, grow your skills..
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    dumplin commented on i know you

    01-16-2010

    Good girl. You hangin wit duh wrong crowd. Git rite sistah.
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