a daughters love

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    a daughters love

    it was march 20th when i got the call

    my mom told me dad was in the hospital

    the nurse told us, he was very sick. in grave danger.

    but as time went on his condition improved.

    i was convinced he would be home soon

    but suddenly he took a turn for the worst

    he fought for 3 months but his body just gave up

    doctor said there was nothing more they could do

    but it was up to us, to decide, to pull the plug

    walking into his room, tears in my eyes

    i could barely work up the strength to tell him goodbye

    it was the hardest thing ive ever had to do

    its been 10 months since hes been gone

    sometimes it still feels like a bad dream

    and even tho were far apart

    hes always going to be close to my heart

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    schizopoet commented on a daughters love

    04-12-2011

    Excellent, heartfelt poem. I too have lost my father and I am still trying to come to grips with the reality that I can't see him on this earth any more. I really feel your pain. Never lose hope that one day you WILL see him again. That's what I believe. Thank you for sharing this poem with me. God bless you.

    Wakeitha commented on a daughters love

    04-04-2011

    Very emotinal poem, nobody can replace your father but somebody can help you get through the hard part. So remember he will always be apart of you. but don't be hard on your self hes gone to a better place. God bless.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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