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    how do i know which path to take?
    it seems there watching every move i make
    waiting for me to make the wrong choice
    ive stopped listening to that voice
    inside my head
    that tells me go ahead
    i need to do what i can to be free
    settle down and just be me
    what if i dont know who i am
    should i take the time to figure out
    what this fucked up world is all about?
    whos gona step in and say
    hey... violence it aint the way
    i wish we could all just stop it TODAY

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    redbloodink commented on random

    01-16-2010

    wow powerful message........ Who you are is the key.... I'm transgendered...... took me a long time to deal with it and just be me in this "what this fucked up world is all about?" as you put it..... the love of God and His mighty word....... showed me"hey... violence it aint the way" this is exactly it.... great write and word...... red
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