daddy

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this is about my loving daddy who is in the hospital and has been for almost 2 months.. i love you dad!!

daddy

 

a big  strong man sits in his recliner
watching the raiders play some ball
sitting next to him his only daughter
asking him bout the referee's last call
his little girl is the son he never had
she enjoys fishing and watching sports with her dad
a big tall man sits in his recliner
watching the Raiders play some ball
sitting next to him his only daughter
asking him bout the referee's last call
his little girl is the son he never had
she enjoys fishing and watching sports with her dad 
she has blue eyes and his birthday
they have a great bond that grows everyday
from going to baseball games
to calling each other names
they are very close its easy to see 
this relationship cannot be broken
thats exactly how it should be
but sadly there are some feelings left unspoken
i love you dad, you mean the world to me
it hurts me knowing youre not where your supposed to be
in your chair explaining things,or even just falling asleep
your amazing daddy the memories are ours to keep
get better dad come one get well
so i can beat you at oh hell
the living room is empty we need you home
because i really hate watching our show alone
you are the best dad, youre going to make it
you know why? because your a miller dammit 

 

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786mona commented on daddy

05-18-2010

wow....wow....i am speechless:) thats the power ur poem have over me....wow!

raych33 commented on daddy

05-18-2010

thanks guys, my dad would hate this i havent even read it to him yet.. he hates emotions..

bluewolf commented on daddy

05-05-2010

What a loving and beautiful tribute for your father. How precious the memories of our time spent with those we love and how precious these of which you shared; thank you for doing so.

cheronld commented on daddy

04-24-2010

Your dad I am sure is extremly proud of you....this poem makes me wish I had a dad...I send my blessings and good wishes your way....Frame this poem for your dad.....

Elotte commented on daddy

04-24-2010

was this written by a youngster? then I can excuse the spelling that is meant for text messages and not for poems. nevertheless, its message is sublime.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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