brandon?

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    brandon?

    you played my feelings like a game
    do you treat all your girls the same?
    you think your clever, you think your slick
    but i don't want you, or your tiny dick
    i want you out of my head
    forget all the moments of us in your bed
    i dont know how you did it
    you made me believe you were worth it
    i don't want to cry over you
    so i'm doing what i can to find someone new
    someone who treats me right
    someone who stays with me the whole night
    i guess you think a different way
    and now i'm the one who has to pay
    you cheated on me and i forgave you
    what more do you want boo?
    you want more girls than one
    you'll probably end up with none
    because that's it brandon im done

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    RHPeat commented on brandon?

    04-27-2009

    It looks like you have an ability to rhyme, but the poetry is lacking metaphor and imagery for the most part. They are interesting rants. a poet friend RH Peat

    frgy25 commented on brandon?

    03-22-2009

    Being young is very confusing. But you'll get through it, I promise.

    brandon commented on brandon?

    03-12-2009

    thats sounds like my lil bro

    Appygirl1 commented on brandon?

    03-12-2009

    i love this poem..it has so much meaning to it and i totally understand what it is saying cause im livin it right now!!

    nakedtruth43 commented on brandon?

    03-12-2009

    Love your stuff..very brave!!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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