Heartbreak

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    Heartbreak

     I wanted to love you, show you I care. Let you be my guide, show me the things thatwasn't there. You changed my world, stole my heart, and now, you tear it apart. Thought this world was safe to live in; thought this world was mines, but I found out it was not minesalone, in and thoughout time.

    The tears fall and the wind is on my back, my heart is acking and my tears are breaking. The things you do to me and the things you tried, all stopped my heart and let me die. You are still breathing, don't give up. Take your hand and fill my cup.

    My heart aches, my soul breaks, my mind turns, and my world burns. You make me laugh, when I want to frown, you give me half, when there's no clown. How can you make me believe that my life would be great, when youtend to turn and try to excape? You said I was holding you here, that I'm not dear, how dare you withhold my story, telling people lies and trying to controll my glory. I gave you all of me, not just part, everything including my heart! Now you stand there like an innocent man, trying to go, holding my hand. Knowing that you have been lying, got me here crying. Wish I would just stop trying to be with you.

    Call it a day and be threw! You make me sick, twisting words and then run and hide. You coward! Don't come back this time, keep going in your life and stay the hell out of mines! For the lord s with me, no man, nor beast, can be against me.

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    Madelynn commented on Heartbreak

    12-12-2009

    Well, you told him! LOL!- Love to read a piece, and the writer puts everthing they feel into that work-and you feel it too. I am sorry you had to endure this pain, to be able to write such a piece. However, the silver lining here is..that you were able to write this piece, and that the Lord blessed you with deeper strength.-peaceNpoetry,Maddi
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