Poem Commentary

Some people are lucky, but some people make the mistake of there life here on earth, such as loosing the love of your life, as in something you will never get back. For me its kind of to rewind time and do somethings diffrently.... But i will not discuss what my shame is.. it unbearable to say for me. i'm just hurting and wanted to write it down. but i thought it was a good one to share with others... So encase there is someone out their who's feeling some kind of shame, sadness, know your not alone... I may not talk to you but i sure will read your poems..... please comment if you like, on weather it was well written good inspiration, or just say that's me if you feel some of what i'm feeling. The inspiration is in the commentary it self.... That's all i want you to say, tell someone you love.. Like I told God... the thing is God already knows.. but its still good P.S Dyfriend