Healing me

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    this is for my new girlfriend, mel i love you. even if you are squeakers right now. hehehe

    Healing me

     To the things you do,
    to the times well share
    ill never hurt you
    as i hold you near
    to myself with so much wrong
    at least i can say
    i did some thing right
    i fell in love with you
    now i say this true
    i have some things to fix
    we both do
    what ever it may be
    to the love that should bloom
    like the flowers in the spring
    the happiness you bring
    the smile you put on my face
    will heal the damage done

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    redbloodink commented on Healing me

    01-24-2010

    What a write... true love found..... can make a difference in our lives as we know them.... red
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    dahlusion commented on Healing me

    12-16-2009

    "the smile you put on my face will heal the damage done " — a lovely poetic truth!
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    cliftondurant commented on Healing me

    12-04-2009

    wonderful poem raven i enjoy the read thanks for sharing
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    uriah007 commented on Healing me

    12-04-2009

    Nice poem. Love does heal the hurts. Good luck in your new relationship... Thank you for sharing...
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    blackfootlady commented on Healing me

    12-04-2009

    Keep writting,you have talent yet unseen.....ty for write,God bless
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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