United

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United

In the hearts of all
The freedom can be seen
to the pride of the soldiers
cross the land
Never feared before the death
to live for pride and respect
is all that can be asked
to the hearts of all lost on
battlefields , lost souls
screaming for forgiveness
screaming for the wars to end
is every soldiers intent
to the lost and found
the pains of fear
never heard , never lost to the lands we call home
always shown to the power of our hearts
as shown , we never back down from a fight thrown our way,
together we are strong, never forced apart.

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ARU commented on United

11-27-2009

I am Raven fan...whateva the endeava...keep that thought process evolving...

cmlestrade commented on United

11-13-2009

Very nice poem. Very intense with the messages and truth of sacrifice. Thank you for such a moving piece.

Rygar commented on United

11-11-2009

nice job raven, im glad you decided to write and post again :)

Chelles commented on United

11-10-2009

This is an absolutely beautiful poem. I have so many friends in the military and there are so many people out there that don't realize what it is that they are fighting for. Wonderful!

daniel081180 commented on United

11-10-2009

This is a very good poem i really enjoy how you depict such a powerful picture of freedom and how we are able to enjoy it. This piece really made me think of what i have and am able to enjoy because someone was willing to fight for it. Thanks alot.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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