Life

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    Life

     In to a line
    drawn by false faces
    turned from the truth
    with all races
    hiden from the faces
    that hurt even worse
    the knife stabed
    the blood poors
    nothing to stop it
    no one to hear
    the crys of pain
    from those so near
    they turn their heads
    so bitter ends
    the young life
    so innocent and pure
    beaten down to nothing
    in a world so cruel.

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    koolmom0 commented on Life

    11-30-2009

    I can see very clearly that you care deeply for those around you. Awesome poem honey. Love Koolmom
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    nonners commented on Life

    11-29-2009

    powerful stuff there. I as well as many have been there.great read
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    Rygar commented on Life

    11-29-2009

    nice write hun, very telling of the way that people are sometimes... :) good job
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    cliftondurant commented on Life

    11-28-2009

    this poem tell me that we should care about one another but so many time no one care good job
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    ARU commented on Life

    11-27-2009

    The moments you spent writing this must have been very sincere, continue to write...
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    ravenrose

    11/27/2009

    thank you

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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