moon goddess

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    moon goddess

    The moon is as bright as your saphire eye
    when i look at the moon im thinking of you

    i see the moon once a day and im glad to say it reminds me of you

    if only, if only i could see twice something as beautiful as you id be suffice

    skin soft and pure
    soft and smooth as we intween

    fire burns at the slightest touch
    the slightest kiss and take  my breath away

    wild fire burns till the saddness of despare of seperation

    till anouther day i feel cold with out you
    thats the reason i think of you as i look up at the moon. my moon goddess

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    Chaos128 commented on moon goddess

    12-23-2009

    This is the second moon goddess poem I've read today. Your construction's a little rocky, but that's OK; I'll put it down to being under the goddess' influence (I understand how that could be a little disconcerting).
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    Vincent commented on moon goddess

    09-22-2009

    You picked a cool subject matter, grammer and spelling is off. but a nice poem. smiles VIncent
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    CMarsh commented on moon goddess

    09-21-2009

    Nicely done! I would only suggest you use spell check before posting it will keep the flow going. But other than that I enjoyed the poem. Many emotions entwined in the poem.
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    SWolfBlood commented on moon goddess

    09-21-2009

    This was a pretty good poem. :) Thanks fur sharing.
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    KagenoKitsune commented on moon goddess

    09-20-2009

    i like poem about iinari. is good, maybe less burning fire, perhaps add in between or take out one idk. but anything about iinari is good
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