Goodbye

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this is my final farewell to my friend rachel.. she decided it best for us to not be friends and not speak to each other again.... so goodbye my friend, and prosper in life, and after, i shal see you again, on the other side... my God be with you

Goodbye

Its time to say goodbye,
because no matter how hard i try,
you never seem to see,
just how hard i try,
to keep this friendship strong,
but i knew deep inside,
it wouldnt be long,
before i had to say goodbye,
i hope your life goes well,
this guy you have sounds quite swell,
you have always been able to rise again,
no matter how hard you fell,
i tried to be supportive,
but again you didnt see,
i didnt mean to hurt you,
and i feel that love for you no more,
only the love to a friend,
but all you have done,
is kicked me out the door,
i know not what i did wrong,
but i know that you are strong,
you said i dont need to defend you,
and i know that this is true,
but still i try,
but only because i still a strong friendship between me and you,
i only wish you knew,
how hard i tried to be a good friend to you...
im sorry for not being supportive,
but i promise i did try,
i guss agian i failed you,
jsut like i did before,
so now i say to you,
i bid thee adoo,
live well,
live strong,
and prosper with this man,
and with this final letter to you,
i say goodbye old friend,
and i only wish you knew,
that to me, there is still a good friend of mine in you...

      Godbye rachel... have a good life, and i shall see you on the other side, i hope you can forgive me for my wrongings and that you find peace with this man, this is my final farewell to you, have children, get married, be happy, and live long with your happy family. i know this changes nothing, and you probably wish to not talk to me still... so again i shall say, goodbye my dear old friend, and i hope that the wounds i inflicted upon you, with time, will mend.... i am sorry.. goodbye...

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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