Fear;

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    How I feel , <3

    Fear;
    Silent steps
    Wild, frantic eyes
    Mind screams
    Feeling the need to cry
    The grip tightening in your chest
    Tense body
    Long, cold, uneven breathing
    The feeling of emptiness in side
    Cold warmth
    Is there a such thing?
    The pounding inside your head
    The emotions
    They’re running everywhere
    Just lay your head down and dream it all away.

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    phatdaddee commented on Fear;

    11-10-2010

    Silent, yes there is such a thing as "Cold warmth" but never has it been put into words so perfectly! This is a new favorite phrase for me! I am stealing it! LOL! Thanks for sharing!
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    pocketofdreams6 commented on Fear;

    08-27-2010

    I really liked the flow of this poem; The mood of the poem was felt and reminded me either withdrawals
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    SilentMelody

    08/30/2010

    Thank you very much (:

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