Doubt

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    Doubt
    What is it that's makes you have to convince your mind

    To force yourself into your own peace

    To feel completely whole, but like you'll unwind

    Never knowing what is , to not know how to make it cease

    I cant shake the feeling that somethings missing

    Where can I find my destiny

    I'm stuck in my corner constantly wishing

    That I will feel that rest in me

    Tell yourself that its all okay

    To be patient and wait for life

    All the hard work will finally pay

    But its hard to deal with all the strife

    Maybe everything is the way its supposed to be

    And I'm just psyching myself out

    Ive figured it out, what I'm supposed to see

    I'm human, and life is full of doubt

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    jennessey69 commented on Doubt

    02-15-2010

    This is my favorite one that u wrote very powerful, enjoy your poetry very much I hope to see u write more.
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    GucciGurl commented on Doubt

    05-28-2009

    Great work. U r very good for your age. Keep taking life experiences and write them down. You make cosider a book of your work. Others have felt or do feel the same way you do
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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