crush

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    crush

    SENSUALLY BEING ME
    LOOKING INTO YOUR EYES
    TRYING NOT TO DISGUISE THE TRUE MEANING OF MY STARE
    WATCHING YOUR LIPS AS YOU SPEAK WITH SUCH DIVINITY
    A PICTUREUSQUE SCENE FOR SOAR EYES TO SEE
    LOCKS FLOW SPIRITUALLY SWAYING POETICALLY
    LIKE ME SHARING THIS CRUSH LYRICALLY
    SUPRISINGLY THROUGH “HE” THE COURAGE TO INTRODUCE ME
    TO MY SURPRISE I SEE YOU GOT THOSE TREES
    TANTALIZING ME HERBALLY
    ‘EVEN TURNS OUT WE ARE FAMILY
    NOT BY BLOOD
    BUT CONNECTED COLORFULLY

    UNFI NISHED

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    Stryx commented on crush

    10-04-2009

    So ofter we use words that confound. Is it a typeo, or carerlessness? Is it soar, as in flying, or sore as in a 'sight for sore eyes?
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    spbsdude commented on crush

    08-11-2009

    I like this, it has a nice, lyrical quality and if it's unfinshed, I'd love to read the rest when you finish it. Thanks for sharing.
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    LAdyAce

    09/02/2009

    Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment

    wheelsal commented on crush

    07-01-2009

    Thought I would look at another of your poems. CAPITALS YKKK. Like the overall. Good job...................
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    MJJohsnon commented on crush

    05-16-2009

    u have to complete this....suspense is killing me...i'm loving every letter in this.
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    cinque commented on crush

    04-27-2009

    INTRUIGING!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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