Missing You

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    Wrote this for a friend that has a long distance relationship ...

    Missing You

     All I can think....Is how I miss you.
    Thinking of some of the things we do.
    A walk in the park or an hour on the phone.
    I wish when I opened the door this was "OUR HOME"
    Remember that day when you made me smile?
    Haven't smiled like that in a while.
    Did you think of me today?
    Hope missin' you is not in the way.
    I have patience and will wait.
    Patiently unitl our next date.

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    Stryx commented on Missing You

    10-04-2009

    Nice and sweet Lady. An easy read. I like it. Thank you.
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    spbsdude commented on Missing You

    09-17-2009

    How painful it can be to wait for someone you truly miss. A nice poem, not your best but nice.
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    LAdyAce

    09/22/2009

    Thanks again.. I know it was sort of spur of the moment written in like a minute. Not alot of thought put in that one.. But thank you for the comment

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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