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    Seriously ...Do I come across foolishly?
    You have the nerve to come to me
    With this wack ass apology
    After u let her disrespect me
    Once upon a time u see
    I would have taken you back open heartedly
    Now theres no trust here with me
    Don't believe a word you breathe...




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    spbsdude commented on none

    07-16-2009

    So much said in so few words, but also so little said. I want to know more. Trust is so important, and when it is not in a relationship that is sad. It's time to move on. No point wasting time with someone you can't trust. Still I would like to know more who she is and who it is you can not trust. Feel free to check my poetry out, as I will be reading more of yours.
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    BLASTHEME commented on none

    06-08-2009

    Ok ladyace, u had me going, waiting for the next verse, waiting to see what was next as the tension was mounting to something that I expected to be a surprise ending & oh bwoy was I surprised...lol....unfinished? Uhhhhhh......lol...smile So how much longer because I was feeelin this. I will be peepin some of your other work. Please feel free to come thru n peep some of my work too. Peace BLAS
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