Constructive Verse I

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    Constructive Verse I

    Fine lines intertwined

    Braided hair, stronger core

    Ropes that break

    Chains—no more.

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    bforibus commented on Constructive Verse I

    01-03-2010

    hmmm... interesting and mentally stimulatiing couple of lines. i do wish there was more, so i guess this poem definitely did its job.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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