Blood Rain

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    Wanna go to a Hot Club?! Great Goth Music!! Great Goth Crowd!! Come Join Us In The Fun!! Sorry, There's always a line, So we can only let you in - one soul at a time! ... xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To get you in the mood ... Open another page and listen to the goth music while reading. Go to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UbnLRraWvHk

    Blood Rain

    There's a little goth club
    on the south side of town.
    A place where everybody goes
    when the Sun goes down.
    Featuring live entertainment
    with some local stars.
    Jammin' demon goth rock
    on their electric guitars!

    I was standin' in the doorway
    scopin' the scene out.
    Just trying to understand
    what this place is about.
    Started walkin' cross the floor
    just when, to my surprise.
    Felt like I was being hunted
    wasn't really sure why?

    The guitar was screeching to the beat of the drums.
    As the singer was screaming from the top of his lungs!
    ~ ~ ~
    Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
      Let it shower - - Taste the pain!
    Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
    Feel his power - - Praise his name!
    Blood Rain!
    ~ ~ ~

    There were eyes to the back of me
    and eyes to the front.
    So hypnotically inviting
    I couldn't move or run.
    They started to form a circle
    in a hedonistic dance.
    Anointing me in their pleasure
    as they begin to chant!

    ~ ~ ~
    Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
      Let it shower - - Taste the pain!
    Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
    Feel his power - - Praise his name!
    Blood Rain!
    ~ ~ ~

    My head started spinnin' so fast
    that I fell to the ground.
    They all sadistically laughed
    with such an evil sound.
    They picked me up and put me
    on a cold marble slab.
    Bound, gagged and shackled
    my limbs hurting so bad!

    Lord Lucifer they summon
    as they call out his name.
    "We've brought you another soul
    an offering is made."
    And the Dark Priest comes forth 
    with his dagger in hand.
    Cuts my heart out of my chest
    and they begin to chant!

    ~ ~ ~ 
    Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
      Let it shower - - Taste the pain!
    Blood Rain! - Blood Rain!
    Feel his power - - Praise his name!
    Blood Rain!
    ~ ~ ~


    KjK 110709




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    bluskyinthenite commented on Blood Rain

    04-02-2010

    You have quit the imagination. Loved this one aswell as all your other writes. thanks... Blood rain..........
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    knight4696

    04/02/2010

    Thanks so much Blue! :) I love that you enjoy my darkside. My imagination sometimes takes me on some pretty twisted journeys! lol! Keeps me on my toes .. and never boring! lol! :) Thanks again my friend! :) Ken

    KLS commented on Blood Rain

    03-14-2010

    That's what I'm talking about! I don't know where you came up with a piece like that but I like it!!!
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    knight4696

    03/15/2010

    Thanks KLS! I appreciate it ... The Muse is funny that way .. I have no idea where it came from either! lol! :) Glad you enjoyed! :) Ken

    LGDisturb commented on Blood Rain

    03-04-2010

    artie is right, the music was a great touch. an awesome flow and a great rhyme scheme. loved it. AWESOME job!
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    knight4696

    03/04/2010

    Thanks LG. I'm happy you enjoyed it! :) I think the music fits it to a tee. Thanks for your awesome comments! : ) Ken

    Artie commented on Blood Rain

    02-20-2010

    The music goes great with this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    knight4696

    02/20/2010

    Thanks Artie! :) I guess all those expanation marks mean you like it! lol :) Thanks again, Ken

    EmotionalWolf commented on Blood Rain

    02-19-2010

    awesome music and very interesting poem :) loving it!
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    knight4696

    02/19/2010

    Thanks EmotionalWolf! :) Glad ya like it. These are actually song lyrics, thus the repeating chant "chorus" I think the music fits this one to a tee! Thanks for your comments and read, Much appreciated. :) Ken

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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