INDECISION

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    Somewhere in a place not soon forgotten . . .

    INDECISION

    Somewhere in a place not soon forgotten ...

    In the inner depths of the mind's own mists ~ lie
    Nightshades of a different dark ~ where
    Distant lies hide behind the truth ~ within the
    Emptiness of a shallow heart!
    Caught inbetween reality and dream
    In the land of never ending questions.
    Silently whispering above the screams ~ forever lost
    In contradiction!  ~ where
    Only the all-knowing ones shall forever reign.
    Never really knowing the pain ~ of Indecision.

                      
                                                          (spelled out)
                                     I.N-D.E.C-I.S-I.O.N

     

     I know I’ve been down this road before ….

                                                                  But here I go!  ~  Here I go again!!!

         

     

     

     

    KjK 861001

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    JadedJezzabel commented on INDECISION

    08-16-2010

    love love love acronymnimical poems.......and you did a fine job on this one indeed.
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    knight4696

    08/16/2010

    Thanks again JJ. It was my first acrostic poem .. I have a couple others (Happy Birthday and Valentines) I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Ken

    Marsink commented on INDECISION

    03-20-2010

    Quite an acronymnimical poem! I can't imagine how long it took to work on this. Great Creative structure and descriptive elements painting that very picture of indecision! Fine work, Ken!
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    knight4696

    03/21/2010

    Thanks again Marsink! This is an older write of mine and my first acrostic poem. It did take me a while to write - but, I love a challenge! :) Thanks again! :) Ken

    Teardrops commented on INDECISION

    03-12-2010

    you had better have a good handle on your mind when you read this its great and yet it makes you truly look at your life and am i like this great poem Marie
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    knight4696

    03/12/2010

    This is my first acrostic poem I wrote. I wrote it around the title. Indecision is a hell of a state to be in ...and even worse when you have to revisit it. :) Thanks again for your awesome comments! :) Ken

    laurilang5 commented on INDECISION

    01-04-2010

    Ken, so interesting to see you stretch and succeed once again. This is a challenging format, I am impressed, your talent is so obvious and beautiful!
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    knight4696

    01/04/2010

    Thanks Lauri! Your comments humble me so. I really appreciate your sentiments. Thx again friend! :) Ken

    danmartyjake1 commented on INDECISION

    12-27-2009

    Indecision. Def spells it out, for sure. Great writing!
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    knight4696

    12/27/2009

    Thanks Marion! :) Yes it definately does. :) I find this style difficult .. but I love a challenge. :) Thanks again, Ken

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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