Beyond The Door ...

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  • The Minds' Eye

    Poem Commentary

    This is the introduction to my second book .. "Beyond The Door" .... Currently a work in progress. This book will contain all of my Poems to date. The First book " Open Windows ~ A different point of view" contains all of my song lyrics and has an underlying story that transitions the reader via a narrative between the different genre's.

    Beyond The Door ...

    In the inner depths of my minds' own mists ...
    Far beyond the realm of reality.
    Lies a place where I only know exists,
    Thru the passageway ~ 
    Of insanity.

    It leads me to a twisted world of bliss ...
    As I venture across it's crooked floors.
    I hear the incessant pounding of fists,
    Coming from somewhere far ~
    Beyond the door.

    I hear cries of anguish and tears of joy ...
    Excitement and horrors that multiply.
    Where dreams and nightmares completely employ,
    Every sight I see ~
    Within my minds' eye.

    Thru darkness and light and hues crimson red ...
    I embark to discover and explore.
    Your invited to join me in my head,
    Come enter if you dare ~
    Beyond the door.




     

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    MootPoint commented on Beyond The Door ...

    08-09-2010

    Very good, but leaves me wanting more. I wasn't too crazy about using "Mind's eye" in the poem. It is not really a cliché, but the expression is not your original idea. I'll still give it a 10. Good Write!
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    knight4696

    08/09/2010

    Thanks Moot! :) It is meant to leave you wanting more on purpose. As stated in the poem's commentary .. this is an introductory poem to the Book .. Beyond The Door .. I'm happy to see it worked. lol! :) Thanks again Pal for the read, comment and 10! :) Ken

    cousinsoren commented on Beyond The Door ...

    03-26-2010

    This is an exquisite metaphorical piece , in which the poet dares the reader to join him in a place that only the poet knows about. The poet has masterly suata
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    knight4696

    03/26/2010

    Thanks Cuz! It's the introductory poem to my 2nd book of the same name. I am currently preparing to bring them both to publishers. Keeping my fingers crossed. Thanks again my friend! :) Ken

    xintensex commented on Beyond The Door ...

    02-21-2010

    We all have that dark place in our minds..I can relate..very good!
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    knight4696

    02/21/2010

    Thank you Intense! I write a lot of Dark Poetry which you will see if you venture further into my writings. But I also have a mix of other styles. Thanks again for the read and comments! :) Ken

    blueberry commented on Beyond The Door ...

    02-13-2010

    Nice picture which probably served as an inspiration to writing this poem.
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    knight4696

    02/13/2010

    Thanks Blueberry! :) but, no ... This poem was inspired by the poems I am including in my book. I needed something that would capture the story that lies behind the door. I actually searched long and hard for the perfect picture to go with it. :) Thanks again! :) Ken

    chubbc commented on Beyond The Door ...

    02-13-2010

    very nice i liked it alot the word play was great i liked the theme behind the door lies many things very good read
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    knight4696

    02/13/2010

    Thanks Chub! :) It is the intro poem to my second book and I am trying to see what people think - I want to draw the reader in and it seems to be working. Thanks again! :) Ken

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