“The Brotherhood”

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    “The Brotherhood”

     

    The eye which watches everything

    And guides us through these times

    The bond we have unbreakable

    So very rare to find

     

    The shield which bores us through the blows

    Built durable and strong

    Shielding us from every strike

    Though battles may be long

     

    The sword which strikes down any foe

    Whomever it may be

    The head force in the battles fight

    Fights hard to no decree

     

    Together built a bond as one

    Just as a family should

    The eye, the shield, and sword our marks

    True brothers understood

     

    Written By

    Edward Lee Palmer II

    ‘December 29, 2008’

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    Panaramicpoet commented on “The Brotherhood”

    05-22-2009

    I am writing about a mideaval story . . . the brother hood thing is really cool. I like it bro. Keep writing ;).
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