“My Brothers”

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    “My Brothers”

    I miss you all with all my heart

    I know you feel the same

    Life takes us everywhere

    So no one is to blame

     

    I miss the way we use to fight

    Have battles in the field

    The day we all got so fucked up

    Ole dude smoked banana peels

     

    I miss the way we use to game

    Where ever at any chance

    My game of choice forever still

    You know is Dragon Lance

     

    Although we are so fare apart

    I do know this the most

    Until the day we meet again

    We hold each other close

     

    Written By

    Edward Lee Palmer II

    ‘December 29, 2008’

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    bforibus commented on “My Brothers”

    05-24-2009

    i liked it.. it seemed to have a lil after school special feel to it to me, but overall it was written well
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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