“All I’d Do”

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    “All I’d Do”

    There is nothing I won’t do for you

    Do everything you ask

    Even if it were to leave you

    To put you in my past

     

    I’d build for you the biggest house

    So we could raise our kids

    However big whatever cost

    Where ever you want to live

     

    I’d work long hours every day

    To give you all you want

    Plus all the things you do deserve

    A life for you to flaunt

     

    I’d live and die for you my love

    And all which we believe

    It’s you and I against the world

    Forever you and me

     

    Written By

    Edward Lee Palmer II

    ‘December 29, 2008’

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    hdmac commented on “All I’d Do”

    08-01-2009

    There is a cliche at the end of your poem. It takes away from the true meaning of your work.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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