“Future Untold”

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    “Future Untold”

    Wonders are whispered often

    For whom there is to hear

    If things not meant for you to know

    Then parts may be unclear

     

    Foretold of what is coming

    But never have been seen

    Still contemplating all the thoughts

    And what they really mean

     

    Visions of what the future holds

    Are truly never real

    We have a chance to choose our fates

    So life is never sealed

     

    With all the ways we have to know

    And base on to believe

    Do not be blind to what can change

    Never to be deceived

     

    Written By

    Edward Lee Palmer II

    ‘December 29, 2008’

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    LadyL714 commented on “Future Untold”

    03-09-2010

    II really like this poem but wonder if the second line of the last paragraph could read: "And based on what to believe..." I could be wrong but it just seems something is missing. Otherwise a nice poem.
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