you...

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you...

i've lost it all 
hit the wall 
i was dazzled by you , i couldn't see 
now I'm lost and want you to remember .....
no matter how many masks i try on , you will always know the real me.
not many do but you.. you know me ... 
i told you everything
except how much i loved you . i don't know if i should .
i don't know if it will hurt me .. and i don't know if I'm willing to take that chance  

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loveangel4life commented on you...

01-18-2010

Love it. Short but meaningful. I understand the feelings within this poem. love is taking a chance, and sometimes its hard to distinguish what the dice say for us...but if we dont play...how do we truly know whether or not we win?

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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